Monday, June 14, 2010

Promise




Tears,
Once formed
Has to fall.
However your lashes may
hug them close

All i can do
my love
Is to
kiss your
lips and
make a smile
bloom.

to cherish
them on the
lotus leaves
of my love

so that you
may finally smile
when the sun shall
shine
after these
grey monsoons
will leave.

Tears once formed
has to fall
do not contain
do not hold back

for i'm here
with kisses that
bloom
and a
heart
thirsting for
someone
to be
loved
by its parched
folds.

6 comments:

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നന്നായിരിക്കുന്നു.
മലയാളത്തില്‍ വായിക്കാന്‍ സാധിച്ചിരുന്നെങ്കില്‍ ഒന്നുകൂടെ ഹൃദ്യമായേനെ..

പരിഭാഷപ്പെടുത്തരുതോ..
ആശംസകള്‍
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രാജേഷ്‌ ചിത്തിര said...

pulsing the feel...meh :)

keep writing...:)

Naushu said...

:)

idiot of indian origin said...

dear meher,
such a soothing poem
of promises heartfelt,
like a walk in the rain.!

the new template too is cool.
cool, consoling blue and droplets of love.

Good !

Unknown said...

heyy doppel..love your comments as always.This was a quick one,a silent unsaid response to the pain of a dear soul.

idiot of indian origin said...

I know.
I am sure your unsaid response has soothed that dear soul's ruffled feathers!
said in silence or screaming,
its the thought that counts.
your sensitivity is what makes you a poet par excellence.
keep on musing .

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