Tuesday, March 30, 2010

PRESSURE

The gravity of a thousand generations

Weighing down on our heads

Something,a great power,invisible

Breaking free from behind the mind's light curtains

Our wounded mass psyche,

War-scarred, withheld and

Unfollowing love.


Life has deserted us on emptiness

Where nothing holds mystery

Not even tomorrow.

7 comments:

idiot of indian origin said...

someone, who's a neighbour to my miserable soul, called me an hour ago and asked, ....

" so you are following her now "?
"her.... WHO ?"

"that girl, who talks like you"
"talks like me... a girl..??? ... WHO?"

" oh you know the muslim girl... who winks " !
" oh ... who winks... Meherin? "
" yah..oof!.. i think ... yes something like that "

" what about her "?
" she is the female version of you " !

"why "???
" you are following her an' you don' know "??

" I 'm following her b'coz she is unique "
"yeah.. thats what I meant " !
"yeah.. sure! we are in total agreement there "

"so... are you going home to see Amma "?
" only if I can meet with you there "

"I 'll try to come...."
" then, I 'll try to Go...."
" you stupid.... please go "
" you wise girl, please come "

Unknown said...

Who are you? really..you made me surprised..please tell me who you are because you seem to know me.

And glad that you found my lines readable..thanks.

I liked that phrase " the girl who winks".. :)

idiot of indian origin said...

Hi Girl,
Who am I ???
Wish someone could tell me !....
Coz, I 've been, I am still... asking that Question , mostly to my soul, in my quest to reach a reasonable resolve to FIX 'ME' somewhere in an ' ACCEPTABLE SLOT' !

I seem to know you ?...
Well, YES !
I know you as a kindred soul! .... someone who feels and reacts the same way!

Yup! I find your lines 'more than readable'!
What you pen (type) down in this blog, assures me that I am NOT alone!
Though I do not seek acceptability and appreciation deliberately, I am glad to find someone, who is on the same wave length.
Yes. I find your SOUL, worth listening to !

I am not sure, how I stumbled on you. Nobody recommended .... Nobody even mentioned!

somehow I got connected to you. Guess its my destiny who prompted your name to me!.... I do not regret it a bit!

Keep on spilling the beans ;-)

I LOVE THE WAY FEELINGS TUMBLE DOWN FROM THE OBSCURE CUPBOARDS OF YOUR SOUL 'N SPROUT WINGS INTO SHAPES 'N FORMS OF DELECTABLE READING!

Have a beautiful day Girl. ( who winks ) ;-)

Unknown said...

sPilling the beans is what i love..somehow makes me strong and alert..thank you for reading through ..if it makes you feel less lonely wherever you are..my words had been fulfilled.

God bless you ,wherever you are.

Unknown said...

"so... are you going home to see Amma "?
" only if I can meet with you there "

"I 'll try to come...."
" then, I 'll try to Go...."
" you stupid.... please go "
" you wise girl, please come "


these lines made me wonder who you are..because these are the exact lines i spoke to a very very special being in my life and there it is on my blog page.. :)

idiot of indian origin said...

yeah!
I spoke those words to a very special being in my life too...
you know, someone who knows you as you are, where there is no need to go into overdrive to demonstrate who you really are...?

Yup! you Meher, makes me feel less lonely, though I prefer to remain a loner in the madding crowd!
THE MORE YOU ARE ALONE, THE LESS YOU ARE ANSWERABLE! I HATE BEING ANSWERABLE. PERIOD!

have a good night Girl.

Unknown said...

Right.. i love my loneliness too..infact i treasure it..when am lonely,it's like a prayer .

But lonely or not, i don't account for my actions to anybody..it's my life..if not for me,then who is going to spend my moments? Nobody takes it that way.For them life's a vicious circle..duties,images,reputation,success..the whole lot.Even they pull love into the same viciousness.

Live your life your own precious secret way..:)..Thanks for being One like that.Stay that way too.-

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